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I'm able to identify with, read, and process your actions as they come to you.
Assuming that you have an average WPM of 45 and I have a WPM of ~110, it is very likely that I will simply "interrupt" you as you go from one sentence to the other, since each sentence is effectively standalone. This would become increasingly common as the numbers in a particular scene increase, and it would be incredibly difficult to keep up with who is doing what through the lines of emote spam.
The only way to circumvent this, that I can think of, is to either have something very OOCly notable... which breaks immersion... or to stack commands, which, if anything, takes longer than typing out the whole thing in its entirety and invalidates your point of wanting to read and process actions as they come to me.
As far as your tells and such go, I personally feel that it would be more desirable to see :
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A russet centaur raises his hand as he notices a rabbit meandering about in the
surrounding foliage. "Rabbit," he intones softly, his gaze never wavering from the animal.
[Person A tells you "So, have you seen that centaur running around lately?"]
[Person B tells you "I need your help."]
[Person C tells you "Have I ever told you that you look absolutely stunning?"]
[Person A tells you "I believe he was of a russet color. He seemed quite helpful, though not too bright."]
A russet centaur readies his bow, his movements careful and steady as he places
his attention fully on his prey. "You shan't escape from me *this* time," he
whispers lightly under his breath, a small smile spreading across his face in
anticipation.
[Person C tells you "Because it's true. I should tell you more often."]
[Person D tells you "If you don't stop running around with that centaur, I'm going to kill you."]
[Person A tells you "Oh, but if you run into him, don't tell him I said that. Or I'll kill you."]
[Person B tells you "Help me please. I really need help."]
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A russet centaur raises his hand as he notices a rabbit meandering about in the surrounding foliage.
[Person A tells you "So, have you seen that centaur running around lately?"]
[Person B tells you "I need your help."]
A russet centaur's gaze never wavers from the rabbit as he speaks, intoning softly.
[Person C tells you "Have I ever told you that you look absolutely stunning?"]
A russet centaur says "Rabbit."
[Person A tells you "I believe he was of a russet color. He seemed quite helpful, though not too bright."]
[Person C tells you "Because it's true. I should tell you more often."]
A russet male centaur places his attention fully on his prey.
A russet male centaur whispers lightly under his breath:
[Person D tells you "If you don't stop running around with that centaur, I'm going to kill you."]
A russet male centaur says "You shan't escape from me *this* time."
A russet male centaur's face breaks into a small smile of anticipation.
[Person A tells you "Oh, but if you run into him, don't tell him I said that. Or I'll kill you."]
[Person B tells you "Help me please. I really need help."]
Edit : Applied word wrap at 80 characters.